Beta Readers for Sci-Fi/Fantasy novel about Dreams
I have polished off an old novel I wrote and revamped it. The first five chapters have been polished and ready for review.
The story is the first in a book series called Night Time Illusions. This book is Book One: The Mind's Eye. The story is about a gathering of hidden psychics who meet in dreams with one another. These people are known as Dreamers and although they come from all walks of life, they each belong to this shared society and culture.
The story centers around a newly acquired Dreamer, Avery, trying to find her place in this world. She is indoctrinated warmly and settles in among them.
But the world isn't as perfect as it is made out to be. For a world of transparency, there is a surprisingly large amount of treachery and deception, puppeted by the infamously hated ruler of the silent world, Tyler Heighal, Dreamer extraordinaire. The pinnacle of control and meticulous manipulation, he makes sure the world lays flat to his palms but there are some who aren't as comfortable